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W skali 1-10 jak zła jest gramatyka w tym tekście?

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Wiem iż tekt ten nie jest idealny, ale każdy tekst da się poprawić. Sc 1: Mr. Smoothie Today after the school Ber were to meet with Gwen and Cooper in the Mr. smoothie but he was late over the hour. Gwen started be angry with it. Ben organised this meeting and now he was last who wasn’t at the place. Cooper despite to her wasn’t angry… he was pretty calm and drawing something in his sketchbook, Gwen eaten a few chips and looked on Cooper. -    Where he is? Ben never miss occasion on Mr. Smoothie. – She asked suddenly. Cooper looked over his sketchbook and replied. -    I think that he has good reason.- Gwen looked on him without believe and she asked him sarcastic. - Really, what?- Cooper put his sketch book on a table and said. -    Today the national championships of racing begin – Gwen after a few minutes said - Sorry but I don’t see any connection.- He sight -    You know how much Ben like a racing.- Gwen nodded and added -    But now he should be here and be cheerful, truth? -    Maybe but this race will be without his favourite driver… Lorenzo Revel.- Gwen tried to remember who Cooper was talking about. In the end he asked. -    It is this an Italian racer whose Ben save a few month ago. -    Yes after this no one see any more. He disaperead. -    Yes and without him this race hasn’t any sense.- Ben who just went inside added. -    Well, welcome to our late gentleman.- Gwen said looked at him. -    Sorry I have good reason to be late.- Ben apolagised sat on the chair. – And propably Cooper already said you what reason it was- Gwen nodded and asked -    But I still don’t understand why you be late so much. – Ben who just ordered a chocolate smoothie, looked at her and replied. -    I spent this time on checking what could happen with Lorenzo. But any of my alien wasn’t be helpful -    Oh so you playing a detective?- Gwen joking. -    No I only feel guilty that Lorenzo disaperead.- Ben explain. -    It wasn’t your fault. He safe your live. Rember. – Ben looked on Gwen and sigh next he said -    Yes as if it were yesterday.- After this word Ben started narrating what happing a few month ago.
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