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Matthew was born in small familly and was thrid son  of Angelica  and Desmond  Young. His older brothers was adults and they was working out of the city. Matthew was going to school but he was not very good. He had bad grades and he went to truancy. His parents tried to do something with it but he was stuborn and made him trouble. He never wanted to learn because he think that it not will give him good job and good money. That's why quicly he started broken a law. He started with from theft and robberies. He was doing  it because he wanted to earn good money. However he was not good in it. He very often was caught by the police and spent most of his youth under the care of a curator or in reformatory. For his parents who wasn't very rich and has hard life sytuation it was very sad. However   Mathew was stuborn and they couldn't doing anything. They wanted to found help from him but before they could do it he escaped from home. Next they never saw him again. Of course they looking for him but never found him. Matthew started work in local gang. He was a supporter who made robberies, beatings, extortions, and enforcing debts, etc. But it was not somethig what he wanted to do because it wasn't giving good  money. That's why he tried to  get promoted to someone higher up and somebody like that was a drug producer. Matthew, who at that time did a lot of drunk and drank. He believed that he could make a new better drug, despite the fact that he never learn chemistry (he never finished school). However, he quickly discovered his talent for chemistry. He started  working with chemical.He was creating new drugs which he testing  on his friends and on himself.  quicly he found that he made really strong drug and show it his boss.He introduced him to one of the lower-ranked gang members, and soon afterwards his product took over the city street. Since then, he was working as a mafia chemist creating increasingly stronger drugs. However everything changed when he met Miley Rex who became her girlfriend. when she became pregnant it changed him.  Mathew wanted to end with  his old life but he was too good. When he tried to leave, his boss kidnaped  Miley and forced him to  working from him longer.  However Matthew who still was really stuborn trying to find the way to break with his old life. One day  he made a plan. The next day he was caught and he started cooperated with the police. For the safety of his girlfriend and her child (she was already in the ninth month of pregnancy),  he began to report on his boss, spying on him and giving information about his moves However he didn;t know that in the ranks of the police is the man of his boss, who reported on him to their both boss.That's why his boss  discovered his betrayal and ordered his beating and killing his girlfriend. His armies attacked Matthew in his lab and beat him to death. However, they were not supposed to kill him, they would deliver him to the boss who wanted to personally kill him. After long hours of torture and beating. He was practically on the brink of death, but he barely lived. Then his former boss decided that he was enough and decided to throw his body into the lake. His beaten and massacred body was transported to the lake with an electric shock so that it would not faint. Then he was thrown into the water and when he was beaten up to Matthew's wounds he got chemicals from his studio, which under the influence of electricity turned into a single chemical compound that was mixed with toxins in the water. as a result, Matthew survived and managed to get out of the water. A good month took him to regenerate his body. And he was sure that his girlfriend was already dead. So he left the city to train in combat and other skills that he could capture in combat. After this time, he returned and began to fight evil. He also took the nickname Risktaker because he did not have anything anymore (his parents were dead, his girlfriend and his child were dead, he had no identity (he was officially dead), home and so on, so he had nothing to lose and he could sacrifice himself fight against evil.
pytanie zadane 4 stycznia 2019 w Edukacja przez użytkownika niezalogowany
 

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