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Najlepiej w formie listy z uwagam i tłumaczeniem zdań w nawiasach -Maybe you should use your techno vision and check which machine is broken?– Cooper accepted this plan and he activated his technopathy power. Ben back to watching a race but now he was ready(żeby wkroczyć do akcji)  Cooper techno-sense feeling all machines around of Cooper and when some machine was broken he feel it. at the same time, cars entered into  the first corner ,raising a cloud of a dust. Cooper  who looking for broken machine, looking around check everything. Suddenly he looked on the track and he was close to shout “ It’s the Lorenzo car. Its engine is broken and it is close to blow up” but he refrained and only shake Ben arm. He looked at him and asked -And what, you found our problem  ?- Cooper nodded and he whispered in a panic - It’s Lorenzo engine it working very fast and it’s close to made explodion. – Ben looked at  him - Are you sure?- Cooper wanted to reply, but suddenly when cars entered into second corner and it was moment when everything going wrong.  White Smoke began to emerge from the bonnet of the red Lorenzo car and it covered the route. The other driver wanted to  accelarated but in this smoke he couldn’t saw anything.  he hit in the red car. Lorenzo lost a control and his car made a few turns (na że kilka razy zakręcil się) and hit in the yellow car which pushed him a few meter away. Lorenzo took back a control  on his car and trying back to the race. But it was a mistake. The other car had to brake suddenly, the drived managed it, but the driver behind him had less luck and slammed into his back. pushing him forward. All three cars collided, and more joined them. Finally on the track was a big collision. The next teams began to ran on to the track to help their drivers and take the cars to the garage it was end of a race . And suddenly everybody noticed how Lorenzo red car began to turn the wheels, raising clouds of dust into the sky. His driver tried  back into the race. But his car was trapped between two other cars and couldn’t moved back. Cooper activated his technopathy vision and looked at  Ben in panic. His friend only nodded. Next he ran out. After a few second blue, black and red streak apperead on the track and with a big speed he started pull the next drivers out of the cars After a few seconds he took Lorenzo from the car. Ben did this in the last moment because a few seconds later the engine exploded. At same moment ben put Lorenzo on the ground and he wanted to ran out but he stopped him
pytanie zadane 6 listopada 2018 w Kultura i sztuka przez użytkownika niezalogowany
 

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