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Maybe you should used your techno vision and check which machine is broken. – Cooper accepted this  plan and he activated his technopathy  power. Ben back to watching a race but now he was ready to step into action. Cooper techno-sense felt all machines around of Cooper and when some machine was broken he feel it. at the same time, cars entered the first corner raising a cloud of dust. Cooper  looking for broken machine. Suddenly he looked on the cars and was close to shout “ It’s the Lorenzo car, his engine is broken and it is close to blow up” but he refrained and only shake Ben arm. He looked on him and asked -And what, you know what machine is broken?- Cooper nodded and he whispered- It’s Lorenzo engine it working very fast and it’s close to made explodion. – Ben looked on him- Are you sure.- Cooper wanted to reply but suddenly when cars entered into second corner and it was moment when everything going wrong. Smoke began to emerge from the bonnet of the red Lorenzo car and it covered the route. The other driver wanted to accelerated but in this smoke he couldn’t saw anything and he hit in the red car. Lorenzo lost a control and his car made a turn and hit in the yellow car who pushed him a few meter away. Lorenzo took back a control and trying back to the race. But it was a  mistake. The other car had to brake suddenly, he managed it, but the driver behind him had less luck and slammed into his back. pushing him forward. All three cars collided, and more joined them. Finally on the track was a big collision. The next teams began to run onto the track to help their drivers and take the cars to the garage. And suddenly everybody noticed how Lorenzo red car began to turn the wheels, raising clouds of dust into the sky. His driver wanted to back into the race. But his car was trapped between two other car and couldn’t moved back. Cooper activated his technopathy vision and looked on Ben in panic. His friend only nodded. Next he ran out. After a few second blue, black and red streak apperead on the track and with a big speed he started pull the next drivers out of the car. After a few second he took Lorenzo from the car. Ben did this in the last moment because a few second later the engine blow up. At same moment ben put Lorenzo on the ground and he wanted to run out but he stopped him
pytanie zadane 6 listopada 2018 w Kultura i sztuka przez użytkownika niezalogowany
 

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